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 Post subject: The Flaw in the Plan (Part II), cynderblocks, helo/athena, G
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Title: The Flaw in the Plan (Part II)
Author: cynderblocks
Characters/Pairings: Helo/Athena
Rating: G
Summary: Part II in a series meant to flesh out the relationship between Helo and Athena
Author's Note: I've never written a fanfic ever, but something about Helo and Athena's relationship compelled me to try and fill in the motivation between their improbable relationship. Hopefully, I do the story justice. Your thoughts and critique are greatly appreciated.


[Somewhere in the forests of Caprica]

It seemed so easy. Get Helo to fall in love with her.

No not “Helo,” Lt. Agathon. Eight had to remember. This human was a mark. A test. Someone to help carry out God’s plan.

It seemed so easy, but the last couple of days were proving difficult to remember her ultimate reason for being “on the run.”

He had his opportunity. Why didn’t he run? Why didn’t he leave without her?

Her mind flashed back to the moment atop the building as she watched Helo make his way away by himself. She remembered her heart sinking. A twinge of disappointment.

And then the elation as he turned around – deciding to come back for her.

She kept telling herself it was joy in the fact that the plan was working. That they were one step closer to fulfilling God’s commands.

But a part of her couldn’t forget that feeling. The feeling she felt when she thought Helo was going to leave. For good.

The more time she spent with Helo, the harder it was to separate the mission from the man. Even Sharon’s memories of Galen were not enough to dampen the feelings that she was beginning to feel for him.

And she hated herself for it.

-End of Part II-

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