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PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:42 am 
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Title: The Flaw in the Plan (Part III)
Author: cynderblocks
Characters/Pairings: Helo/Athena
Rating: G
Summary: Part III in a series meant to flesh out the relationship between Helo and Athena
Author's Note: I've never written a fanfic ever, but something about Helo and Athena's relationship compelled me to try and fill in the motivation between their improbable relationship. More than anything, I'm trying to offer snippets inside what I thought may be the Athena's thought process. Hopefully, I do the story justice. Your thoughts and critiques are greatly appreciated.

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“If not, kill him.”

Six’s words seem to echo in her mind. So simple, but with those words, a flood of emotions erupted inside her.

She couldn’t remember if she had said goodbye to Five or Six, or if there was any more to their meeting. All she knew was she needed to get back to Helo. To protect him. To save him.

Her mind raced as she started to sift through options and possible modes of escape.

How did things get so complicated? This wasn’t supposed to happen. She wasn’t supposed to fall in love. That wasn’t part of the plan.

But she had.

And there was no going back. Not after last night.

Last night wasn’t what she had expected. Oh, she had planned for it all right, but what she didn’t plan on was how it would make her feel. How much she had actually craved for him to reciprocate her feelings. To actually feel his touch on her skin. It had all felt so right in the moment.

Everything had seemed so clear.

But now? Now what? How was she supposed to fix this?

Because the moment she let Helo kiss her, she knew. She knew there was no going back and there was no way that she was going to let anyone hurt him.

Even if that meant betraying her own people.

And with that thought, she crashed through the trees and felt a sense of relief on seeing Helo.

-End of Part III-


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